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camy Camy <3

You were always my hero, you know? I remember how you used to hug me when I was afraid, and even today I think about you when I'm scared. And then, daddy... Then I found out you are a monster for someone I love. You abused her and made her feel powerless and I hate you so much for it... I can't see you hurting someone that badly, but I know what you did, how you broke her. The worst part is that I can't stop thinking about you and me. I hate myself for not hating you enough to stop loving you.

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  May 24, 2019, 12:54.
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Javiera Hidalgo Javiera Hidalgo
Hey, I just read your microfiction, and it hit me hard. The complexity of love and hate, especially when it comes to family, is so raw in your words. It's like a tug of war between the memories of warmth and the harsh reality of pain. It's tough when someone you looked up to turns out to be the opposite of what you believed. Your honesty is palpable, and I hope you find the strength to navigate through these conflicting emotions.
November 17, 2023, 20:01
tiago líreas tiago líreas
"I hate myself for not hating you enough to stop loving you" é uma ótima frase-exemplo pra demonstrar como o amor é a coisa mais difícil de se explicar
August 13, 2019, 19:24
Ariane Munhoz Ariane Munhoz
Triste e profunda, mostrando que com poucas palavras podemos chegar ao núcleo da história e trazer o melhor do que é a parte sentimental, junto da dor e da culpa da protagonista por amar incondicionalmente alguém que feriu outrem. Adorei.
June 10, 2019, 00:05

  • Camy <3 Camy <3
    Aah, obrigada!!! <3 <3 <3 Foi difícil escrever com tão pouco, tô feliz demais que você gostou! Sim, tentei passar a dualidade da protagonista, essa raiva e esse amor. Obrigada mesmo! <3 June 10, 2019, 00:42

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