Marcus was carrying what felt like the fourth bag to the car. When he went back inside, his girlfriend Estelle was beaming at him from their bedroom.
“I am so excited for this trip! It's going to be awesome!” She cried out jumping up and down and doing a little dance.
“Do you think we packed enough stuff?” she asked suddenly worried. He walked over to her, taking her hands into his.
“I’m so happy you’re coming but I just carried the fourth bag to the car, I think we’re good to go.” he chuckled, shoulders shaking with laughter.
“Don’t worry, everything we need, we have. If we forgot something we can just buy it when we get there” he added, leaning forward giving her a kiss on the forehead.
She smiled back “You’re right, I don’t know why I’m so wired up, I’m so ready for this weekend.” Marcus laughed at her, she always got like this whenever they went out somewhere.
“I am too but before we leave there’s something I have to tell you. It's about my aunt...she’s a bit strange, not in a bad way though, she has strange habits and rules that we have to follow. So, when we get there, please don’t to be alarmed when she behaves weirdly okay?” he finished.
It was his turn to be worried. The concern on his face was wiped away by her hand taking his. She kissed him on the nose.
“Don’t worry about it, it will all work out my love. Let’s get going”
After checking that they locked the doors, they got into the car and drove off.
Thank you for reading!
This story was amazing, and how the deer was frozen as a really good twist. That twist made me read on, good descriptive language too. My only fault is the punctuation. But hey? Thats all writers weaknesses! This was just this part that did confuse me a bit. it was when it said at the bottom. 'Please just go with it," he added. Which made me a bit confused and ruined me visualising the story like a movie rather than a book. But I am certain that was a typo. Cant wait for more! I am still hooked!
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