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Gemma is passed over for a raise by a rude colleague, yet is offered an intriguing job by this very person: she's to go to Iceland to discover the identity of a possible Superhero. The premise is refreshingly new (I watched the series as a kid) and Gemma seems quite likeable. I can't wait to read on
Gemma arrives in Iceland, but no taxi is there to fetch her. Unable to walk to the hotel on foot, a friendly male stranger picks her up, warms her and takes her to his home. The pace of the story is picking up fast, there are hardly any spelling mistakes and the story is very interesting so far!
The stranger introduces himself as the man Gemma came to meet. The sparks of attraction begin to sagely fly before she is taken to a guest room. After she calls her friends, Gemma lies down. There are a couple of spelling mistakes, but the possible couple is cute and remains Gemma engaging
Gemma's colleague calls to ask if she's made some headway. During breakfast, Gemma asks Magnús about Sportacus, but is still disbelieving that he even exists. The chapter is well written, some smaller grammar mistakes, but they don't disturb the general flow of the story. It's very interesting!
Gemma snoops around Magnús's house, then heads outside. Stepping onto a frozen lake, she falls into the water and is saved by Sportacus. The first meeting between the two!! She's rather cool here, but the superhero is friendly and helpful. Apparently he doesn't look like Magnús...how exciting!
This is so cool! I love the way you write. I haven't watched the show this is based on since I was 2 (so like a million years ago). But I love the way you portray the characters. This is really good!
There are some spelling and grammar issues here, but they could be quickly corrected. In this chapter, it becomes clear that Magnús is Sportacus. I was a bit disappointed that it occurred so soon, but it was an interesting twist to suddenly change the point of view to him to find out what he thinks
The first dinner date between Gemma and Magnús. There are several smaller grammatical mistakes and since the chapter before was repeated, the date is very sudden. It's obvious he's interested in her and she in him, but Gemma is somehow finding it hard to believe. A touch of romance, but not too much
Some mistakes, but so sweet!! Magnús shows Gemma around his home country and then takes her to the perfect spot to admire the Northern Lights. It's so cute how the pair slowly get closer, but hang back. This chapter was thoroughly enjoyable to read!
Lovely chapter. Gemma finally admits to her friends that she has feelings for both Magnús and Sportacus, yet is undecided what to do. Magnús takes her to his film studio. The main characters are very sweet as they carefully dance around each other.
A few minor spelling mistakes, but otherwise the pace is picking up again. Gemma meets Stefan, who is visibly uncomfortable when she questions him about Sportacus. She becomes slightly unpleasant as she leaves to snoop around. The suspense is increasing - what will she find at the studio?!
Romance!! I loved this chapter! Stefan tells Magnús to be careful around Gemma and Magnús admits that he knows Gemma's hiding something from him. The change of perspective near the middle was unexpected, but it helps to understand what both sides are thinking. The ending was very cute
Gemma and Magnús share a sweet morning moment before he goes to work. Gemma calls her best friends and confesses her feelings for Magnús to them. She decides to choose him over the article and decides to come clean. The conversation with her friends, her decision and her with Magnús - totally cute!
Sportacus once again rescues Gemma - she keeps conveniently landing up in trouble, it seems - and she confesses to him that she loves Magnús. At the hospital, she tries to tell Magnús, but he tells her they'll speak the following day. The pace is slowing slightly, but it's loads of fun to read this
This was so perfectly sweet!! How Gemma is forced to confess to Magnús after her friend did it for her, and then how she tells him the truth. Magnús's reaction hurts, but it's understandable. You really feel for Gemma afterwards. Really well-written - I don't want the story to end soon ::((
I don't want this story to end!! Well, Magnús is undecided what to do about Gemma's confession - tell her the truth or not? Gemma is filled with regret and there's a strangeness and distance between the couple that wasn't there before. Another really well-written chapter with the suspense increasing
This just keeps getting even better! Sportacus is depressed after Gemma leaves, but his crystal ball tells him someone is in danger...outside the country! A plane accident is about to occur and Gemma is in the middle of it. The action here is really good, it's exciting and unexpected
LOVED. IT. Sportacus saves the day and reveals himself to Gemma in the best possible way, romance-wise: with a kiss! There's a sort-of-panicky moment when you're supposed to believe Sportacus didn't make it, but finally he and Gemma confess and work things out. This while story is just soooo cute!
Aw, man! After things seemed resolved, Gamme and Magnús are stalling again unnecessarily. He flies her home, but there's a weirdness between them again and he seems unsure if she won't perhaps sell his secret to the world. Gemma's friends repeat that she should follow her heart. Too much stalling...
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