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camy Camy <3

You were always my hero, you know? I remember how you used to hug me when I was afraid, and even today I think about you when I'm scared. And then, daddy... Then I found out you are a monster for someone I love. You abused her and made her feel powerless and I hate you so much for it... I can't see you hurting someone that badly, but I know what you did, how you broke her. The worst part is that I can't stop thinking about you and me. I hate myself for not hating you enough to stop loving you.

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  May 24, 2019, 12:54
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tiago líreas tiago líreas
"I hate myself for not hating you enough to stop loving you" é uma ótima frase-exemplo pra demonstrar como o amor é a coisa mais difícil de se explicar
August 13, 2019, 19:24
Ariane Munhoz Ariane Munhoz
Triste e profunda, mostrando que com poucas palavras podemos chegar ao núcleo da história e trazer o melhor do que é a parte sentimental, junto da dor e da culpa da protagonista por amar incondicionalmente alguém que feriu outrem. Adorei.
June 10, 2019, 00:05

  • Camy <3 Camy <3
    Aah, obrigada!!! <3 <3 <3 Foi difícil escrever com tão pouco, tô feliz demais que você gostou! Sim, tentei passar a dualidade da protagonista, essa raiva e esse amor. Obrigada mesmo! <3 June 10, 2019, 00:42

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