Vielen Dank für das Lesen!
This story was amazing, and how the deer was frozen as a really good twist. That twist made me read on, good descriptive language too. My only fault is the punctuation. But hey? Thats all writers weaknesses! This was just this part that did confuse me a bit. it was when it said at the bottom. 'Please just go with it," he added. Which made me a bit confused and ruined me visualising the story like a movie rather than a book. But I am certain that was a typo. Cant wait for more! I am still hooked!
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